Monday, December 11th 2017
Proofreading
Proofreading 1:Negotiationg price
Negotiating the price
They've reached an agreement - it is much better to use non-contracted version for copy writing, and in this case the tense is not correct. (illogical)
They will reach an agreement.
Agreed to pay a job deposit - the meaning is unclearAgreed to pay a deposit for the job to Sribulancer.
-Optional for clarity-
for easy communication
for an easy communication
Deposit here means a partial payment made at the time of purchase (or balance to be paid later). (source: Wordweb)
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